From 13c818fa27e4dd3994881fb2f45c2dea3d23363d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: projektir <oprojektir@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 11 Apr 2017 22:29:42 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Updating docs for std::sync::Weak #29377

---
 src/liballoc/arc.rs | 66 ++++++++++++++++++++++-----------------------
 1 file changed, 33 insertions(+), 33 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/liballoc/arc.rs b/src/liballoc/arc.rs
index 28f6d97756f..182a107e3f7 100644
--- a/src/liballoc/arc.rs
+++ b/src/liballoc/arc.rs
@@ -165,18 +165,29 @@ unsafe impl<T: ?Sized + Sync + Send> Sync for Arc<T> {}
 #[unstable(feature = "coerce_unsized", issue = "27732")]
 impl<T: ?Sized + Unsize<U>, U: ?Sized> CoerceUnsized<Arc<U>> for Arc<T> {}
 
-/// A weak version of [`Arc`][arc].
+/// `Weak` is a version of [`Arc`] that holds a non-owning reference to the
+/// managed value. The value is accessed by calling [`upgrade`] on the `Weak`
+/// pointer, which returns an [`Option`]`<`[`Arc`]`<T>>`.
 ///
-/// `Weak` pointers do not count towards determining if the inner value
-/// should be dropped.
+/// Since a `Weak` reference does not count towards ownership, it will not
+/// prevent the inner value from being dropped, and `Weak` itself makes no
+/// guarantees about the value still being present and may return [`None`]
+/// when [`upgrade`]d.
 ///
-/// The typical way to obtain a `Weak` pointer is to call
-/// [`Arc::downgrade`][downgrade].
+/// A `Weak` pointer is useful for keeping a temporary reference to the value
+/// within [`Arc`] without extending its lifetime. It is also used to prevent
+/// circular references between [`Arc`] pointers, since mutual owning references
+/// would never allow either [`Arc`] to be dropped. For example, a tree could
+/// have strong [`Arc`] pointers from parent nodes to children, and `Weak`
+/// pointers from children back to their parents.
 ///
-/// See the [`Arc`][arc] documentation for more details.
+/// The typical way to obtain a `Weak` pointer is to call [`Arc::downgrade`].
 ///
-/// [arc]: struct.Arc.html
-/// [downgrade]: struct.Arc.html#method.downgrade
+/// [`Arc`]: struct.Arc.html
+/// [`Arc::downgrade`]: struct.Arc.html#method.downgrade
+/// [`upgrade`]: struct.Weak.html#method.upgrade
+/// [`Option`]: ../../std/option/enum.Option.html
+/// [`None`]: ../../std/option/enum.Option.html#variant.None
 #[stable(feature = "arc_weak", since = "1.4.0")]
 pub struct Weak<T: ?Sized> {
     ptr: Shared<ArcInner<T>>,
@@ -766,14 +777,11 @@ unsafe impl<#[may_dangle] T: ?Sized> Drop for Arc<T> {
 }
 
 impl<T> Weak<T> {
-    /// Constructs a new `Weak<T>`, without an accompanying instance of `T`.
+    /// Constructs a new `Weak<T>`, allocating memory for `T` without initializing
+    /// it. Calling [`upgrade`] on the return value always gives [`None`].
     ///
-    /// This allocates memory for `T`, but does not initialize it. Calling
-    /// [`upgrade`][upgrade] on the return value always gives
-    /// [`None`][option].
-    ///
-    /// [upgrade]: struct.Weak.html#method.upgrade
-    /// [option]: ../../std/option/enum.Option.html
+    /// [`upgrade`]: struct.Weak.html#method.upgrade
+    /// [`None`]: ../../std/option/enum.Option.html#variant.None
     ///
     /// # Examples
     ///
@@ -798,13 +806,13 @@ impl<T> Weak<T> {
 }
 
 impl<T: ?Sized> Weak<T> {
-    /// Upgrades the `Weak` pointer to an [`Arc`][arc], if possible.
+    /// Attempts to upgrade the `Weak` pointer to an [`Arc`], extending
+    /// the lifetime of the value if successful.
     ///
-    /// Returns [`None`][option] if the strong count has reached zero and the
-    /// inner value was destroyed.
+    /// Returns [`None`] if the value has since been dropped.
     ///
-    /// [arc]: struct.Arc.html
-    /// [option]: ../../std/option/enum.Option.html
+    /// [`Arc`]: struct.Arc.html
+    /// [`None`]: ../../std/option/enum.Option.html#variant.None
     ///
     /// # Examples
     ///
@@ -865,10 +873,7 @@ impl<T: ?Sized> Weak<T> {
 
 #[stable(feature = "arc_weak", since = "1.4.0")]
 impl<T: ?Sized> Clone for Weak<T> {
-    /// Makes a clone of the `Weak` pointer.
-    ///
-    /// This creates another pointer to the same inner value, increasing the
-    /// weak reference count.
+    /// Makes a clone of the `Weak` pointer that points to the same value.
     ///
     /// # Examples
     ///
@@ -900,14 +905,11 @@ impl<T: ?Sized> Clone for Weak<T> {
 
 #[stable(feature = "downgraded_weak", since = "1.10.0")]
 impl<T> Default for Weak<T> {
-    /// Constructs a new `Weak<T>`, without an accompanying instance of `T`.
+    /// Constructs a new `Weak<T>`, allocating memory for `T` without initializing
+    /// it. Calling [`upgrade`] on the return value always gives [`None`].
     ///
-    /// This allocates memory for `T`, but does not initialize it. Calling
-    /// [`upgrade`][upgrade] on the return value always gives
-    /// [`None`][option].
-    ///
-    /// [upgrade]: struct.Weak.html#method.upgrade
-    /// [option]: ../../std/option/enum.Option.html
+    /// [`upgrade`]: struct.Weak.html#method.upgrade
+    /// [`None`]: ../../std/option/enum.Option.html#variant.None
     ///
     /// # Examples
     ///
@@ -926,8 +928,6 @@ impl<T> Default for Weak<T> {
 impl<T: ?Sized> Drop for Weak<T> {
     /// Drops the `Weak` pointer.
     ///
-    /// This will decrement the weak reference count.
-    ///
     /// # Examples
     ///
     /// ```